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      From the issue dated January 3, 2003

      Why Johnny Can't Write, Even Though He Went to Princeton

      By THOMAS BARTLETT
      
       Ask Clare Gould about her freshman course in writing, and the
      bright, pleasantsenior at Princeton University makes no
      attempt to hide her disgust. "It was rotten," she says.
      
      She describes a disorganized class taught by a graduate
      student who was killing time and his students' enthusiasm. "I
      have never heard of anyone who had a good or even passable
      experience in their writing course," she says.
      
      Realizing the deep dissatisfaction among students like Ms.
      Gould about how writing was taught at the university,
      Princeton ditched the program last year and began afresh. It
      took writing courses away from inexperienced graduate
      students, hired a group of lecturers to take their places, and
      created a slew of new, required, topic-based courses. It was a
      radical step, but one that many believe was long overdue.
      
      More than a few top colleges have made similar moves in recent
      years, or are in the process of doing so. Some, like Princeton
      and Duke University, have started over from scratch. Others,
      like Columbia University, are proceeding with caution. And
      there are those that, like Brown University and Bowdoin
      College, know that what they're doing now doesn't work but are
      not sure how to proceed. While the situations and solutions
      differ, officials at each of these prestigious institutions
      have arrived at the same conclusion: Their college has not
      been doing a good job of teaching students how to write.
      
      Report after report -- from the one issued in 1998 by the
      Boyer Commission on Educating Undergraduates to this year's
      National Survey of Student Engagement, an extensive look at
      student attitudes -- has emphasized the importance of
      undergraduate writing. It's hard to find a college president
      or liberal-arts dean who can't give a solemn, impromptu
      lecture on the subject. In short, everyone seems to agree.
      
      So why is it that, even at the nation's best colleges, the
      teaching of writing has long been treated less like a high
      priority and more like an afterthought? And if that neglectful
      attitude is beginning to change, as seems to be the case, what
      took so long?
      
      One answer is that writing instructors don't get much respect
      in academe. "There's this image that it's janitorial cleanup
      or service work," says Nancy Sommers, director of expository
      writing at Harvard University. Another is that many students
      view writing requirements as just one more hoop to jump
      through before they can don the cap and gown. Those problems
      are not unrelated: Because writing programs are frequently
      ignored, their quality suffers. Students then end up stuck in
      classes that waste their time and try their patience.
      
      As to what has prompted this recent round of reform, some say
      it's Ivy-see, Ivy-do. "When somebody does something, all the
      other institutions perk up their ears," says Eric Schneider,
      associate director of academic affairs at the University of
      Pennsylvania.
      
      Administrators also point to an increase in the number of
      complaints from professors. "We've been hearing from faculty
      members that students are having trouble with their writing,"
      says Paul B. Armstrong, dean of the college at Brown.
      
      What kind of trouble? Professors cite a host of
      writing-related shortcomings among students, most often their
      inability to construct the sort of lengthy, sophisticated
      research papers required in upper-division courses. "Almost
      everyone comes in well-trained to gather research in the
      library," says Judith A. Swan, a lecturer in Princeton's
      writing program. "But almost none of them are capable of
      turning that into a real paper with a thesis and an argument."
      
      The trend isn't limited to top-ranked colleges. "I haven't
      seen a newly revised curriculum plan that failed to emphasize
      writing," says Carol Geary Schneider, president of the
      Association of American Colleges and Universities, which
      advises colleges on curriculum reform. But the debate over
      these issues at elite colleges is instructive, writing experts
      say, because these institutions aren't finding easy solutions
      despite having top students and bountiful resources, which
      several of them are now using to promote reforms.
      
      'A Bunch of Bad Classes'
      
      At Princeton, students called them the "W" courses. Since the
      1960s, the university had required undergraduates to take one
      course with a "W" after its course number, a designation that
      was reserved for writing-intensive offerings. Originally,
      those courses were taught only in the English department. That
      changed in the late 1980s, when courses outside the English
      department became eligible, greatly expanding the number of
      options to satisfy the requirement.
      
      While intended to encourage the teaching of writing within a
      variety of disciplines -- an approach that many experts favor
      -- the effort failed. "Some students got superb instruction,
      and some got very little," says Howard N. Dobin, associate
      dean of the college. "There was a general acknowledgment that
      we were not doing as well in this as we could."
      
      That's putting it too kindly, according to Ms. Gould, the
      Princeton senior, who majors in biology. "It has a history of
      being limited to a bunch of bad classes," she says. Her
      father, James Gould, a professor of biology at Princeton, was
      so upset by his daughter's "absolutely terrible" experience
      that he volunteered to teach in the new program. "If we want
      students to write decent papers or honors theses -- which are
      required here -- then it's essential that we teach them to
      write well," he says.
      
      As the chorus of complaints grew louder, Princeton responded
      by bringing in a group of outside reviewers. They came to the
      same conclusion that professors and students had already
      reached: the "W" program didn't work.
      
      To fix it, the university last year hired 20 lecturers, who
      had some experience teaching writing, on one-year renewable
      contracts of up to five years. Princeton also made taking a
      topic-based writing course separate from the other 30
      requirements that students must meet; until last year, a
      writing course could also fulfill other graduation
      requirements. And Princeton created dozens of topic-based
      courses, like "Bandits in Myth and History" and "Dracula," in
      which the subjects are intended to provide fodder for
      students' essays. The emphasis in these courses, which are
      outside any department, is not on learning the reading
      material but on learning to write.
      
      Duke students, too, had been saddled for years with a failed
      writing program. Since the mid-1980s, Duke had used a method,
      developed by a now-retired English professor, that was based
      on peer interaction. In 1999, the university revamped its
      requirement. "It was clear to the faculty that it was broken.
      It was clear to the students who took it. It was clear to the
      parents of those students and their grandparents," says Robert
      J. Thompson, dean of the liberal-arts college at Duke.
      
      So if even grandparents knew, why did it take so long to act?
      Mr. Thompson chalks up the long delay to "inertia." In that,
      Duke is far from unique. Writing programs are notoriously
      difficult to remake, and few officials look forward to the
      battles that will no doubt ensue once any change is proposed.
      "Generally, people feel it's a dean's nightmare, because you
      have so many constituencies that are unhappy," says Ms.
      Sommers of Harvard, who was one of Duke's outside reviewers.
      
      Both Duke and Princeton ended up with programs that resemble
      Harvard's. Both chose to put the teaching of freshman writing
      in the hands of instructors hired on contract (Harvard calls
      them "preceptors"). That takes the courses away from graduate
      students, who usually view them as a chore anyway, and gives
      them to instructors who have already earned their doctorates
      and who have some experience teaching writing. It is an
      expensive solution -- Mr. Thompson has dubbed it "the
      million-dollar difference" -- and one that most institutions
      could not afford.
      
      Duke also requires students to take two writing-intensive
      courses in their majors. (Such courses are defined simply as
      including a "significant writing component.") The university
      took its cue from Cornell's writing program, which emphasizes
      writing in the disciplines, meaning that the teaching burden
      is shouldered by all departments, not just English. Cornell
      has also managed to persuade faculty members to participate by
      tying the amount of graduate-student funds a department
      receives to the number of freshman writing seminars its
      professors teach. It's a strategy that is widely admired, if
      not widely imitated, by other colleges.
      
      The verdict is still out on whether the new programs at Duke
      and Princeton will transform their students into more lucid,
      thoughtful writers. Student reaction at Princeton is mixed.
      "It wasn't the greatest class I've taken, but it wasn't a
      waste of time either," says Marcus Catsouphes, who took the
      course "Vietnam in Fact, Film and Fiction."
      
      Active and Passive
      
      Some competitors are still in the early stages of reform. At
      Columbia, back in the early 1990s, a committee of outside
      reviewers was convened to evaluate the writing program. The
      panel found it sorely lacking and said as much in a report.
      The university's response? Do nothing. Then, two years ago, an
      internal review committee was formed. It found that almost
      everyone strongly disliked the freshman writing requirement,
      and that it contained a number of "absurdities," including a
      ban on assigned readings. The policy was intended to place the
      emphasis on writing, but it backfired: Students didn't have
      anything to write about. The committee recommended lifting the
      reading ban, hiring a new director, and involving faculty
      members rather than leaving the teaching to graduate students.
      "We were fully prepared for our report to get filed in the
      backroom and gather dust," says Michael Scammell, a professor
      of nonfiction creative writing, who led the committee.
      
      But in fact, Columbia has acted on some of the
      recommendations. Joseph Bizup, formerly co-director of the
      writing program at Yale University, was hired this summer.
      While most students are still in the old freshman writing
      program, about 20 percent are taking topic-based courses, in
      which some reading is assigned. So far, the response has been
      favorable. "There was a sense that writing was dislocated from
      the rest of the curriculum. We want to integrate it into the
      core curriculum," says Mr. Bizup, referring to Columbia's
      famously rigorous set of general requirements.
      
      Brown officials, too, are struggling with how to make sure
      their students can write well. But Brown is at the other end
      of the spectrum in terms of educational philosophy. While
      Columbia is known for its general requirements, Brown is known
      for allowing students to choose their own curriculums. While
      that freedom is part of the university's identity, it makes a
      writing requirement impossible.
      
      Until recently, Brown identified incoming freshmen whose
      writing needed extra attention by looking at their admissions
      essays. But because many students receive help writing those
      essays, that turned out to be a poor indicator. So this year
      Brown abandoned the practice. The university still gives
      professors the option of marking students as "writing
      deficient" as part of their grades. Those students are
      encouraged, although not required, to sign up for an
      expository-writing course. "It seems OK on the books," says
      Rhoda L. Flaxman, director of the writing program at Brown.
      
      In practice, however, the strategy is a bust. "Faculty haven't
      been using it," says Mr. Armstrong, dean of the college.
      Apparently, many professors believe that marking a student
      deficient carries an unfair stigma. Josh Gang, a senior
      majoring in American literature, thinks that Brown officials
      might be more worried that marking a large number of students
      deficient would reflect poorly on the university. "It wouldn't
      surprise me if they were afraid to deem students as
      unqualified," he says.
      
      Whatever the reason, the result is that only a handful of
      students receive help with their writing, even though Mr.
      Armstrong says faculty members complain to him about it all
      the time.
      
      While officials look at alternatives, the dean has sent out
      letters encouraging professors to use the "writing deficient"
      option when it is called for. "It's not a crisis, but it is a
      growing concern," he says.
      
      Concern is also growing at Penn, which has sought a director
      for its undergraduate writing program for more than a year.
      The trouble is that the university hasn't been able to decide
      what kind of program it wants, which makes picking a director
      tricky.
      
      For now, students can satisfy the university's writing
      requirement in one of two ways -- either by taking a writing
      course taught by a graduate student, or by taking two courses
      designated as writing-intensive within a department. Most
      students choose to take one course instead of two. "I don't
      think it's been presented to our students as an intellectually
      stimulating and important enterprise. I think they see it as
      another requirement they have to fill," says Rebecca Bushnell,
      associate dean of Penn's college of arts and letters and
      acting director of the writing program. Neither option has
      been particularly effective in improving student writing,
      according to Penn officials, which has frustrated professors.
      
      Once a permanent director is hired, which officials say will
      happen soon, Penn plans to announce an overhaul of its writing
      program.
      
      Likewise, officials at Bowdoin say major changes to its
      undergraduate writing program will be announced soon. The
      college already offers freshman writing seminars, but they are
      not required.
      
      As at other institutions, Bowdoin's decision is prompted by
      concern among professors that some students lack the skills to
      write lengthy, sophisticated research papers. "There is a
      sense that we can do better," says Craig A. McEwen, dean for
      academic affairs. He adds that the college plans to emphasize
      writing in the disciplines, rather than a more general
      approach.
      
      Reform-minded college officials share the hope that the
      changes they are making will finally give writing the
      attention and respect it deserves. "Writing is the edifice on
      which the rest of education rests," says Penn's Mr. Schneider.
      "If we don't do that well, you have to wonder what we do do
      well."
      

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